Rhyme of Self Crime – Uŋкŋσﺲŋ
The lyrics will say it all. Rate/Comment/?Sub? Lyrics Ok so we know my songs have been personal before But I’m going to listen to this beat and just write a little more The last years of my life has been closed door after closed door Convince myself that it was all because of that fucking whore I went from good to bad, from bad to worse From worse to bottom, and I called it a curse For real though all I had were these words And I figured every little letter was better here than turned to …
February 9th, 2010 at 2:34 am
you don’t gotta get all defensive man I was just putting in my 2 cents, if ya don’t like the advice then don’t take it, maybe I am stuck in cookie cutter rhyme schemes, but that’s just me.
February 9th, 2010 at 3:57 am
Well I did 5 years in NC and 4 in FL. So the south definitely has a huge influence on me in all ways.
February 9th, 2010 at 5:03 am
I got defensive because it wasn’t advice posted it was “you don’t rhyme, and what you do rhyme is s00pr simple” Especially when you post lines that aren’t even part of the same scheme. They belong to the lines above and below. If you’re going to give advice make it constructive sounding and accurate. If you don’t want your ‘advice’ responded to…don’t post it?
February 9th, 2010 at 6:28 am
Wow.. that shit was dope man… wicked lyrics… great hook.. very well packaged… 5 Stizzles.. Favoritizzled… my fizzle wizzle rizzle!!!
February 9th, 2010 at 8:39 am
Thanks for sure man. I try not to sound the same over and over, my style can be ridiculously different if I feel a certain way. Probably be my downfall one day. But if you want to work on your shit stay persistent, and beats you identify with.
February 9th, 2010 at 8:54 am
its good shit dude. You seem to be the bomb as far as styles and flows go dude, I can’t even keep up haha. You do some off the wall schemes that people don’t expect, like what had the idiot in those comments earlier trippin, he don’t know shit. Makes me wanna stop fuckin around and smooth my sound out, i feel like I’m comfortable with the writtens, I just never speak em haha.
February 9th, 2010 at 9:25 am
lol. Dopizzle. Thanks a lot man. This song came together pretty easily after the first two bars. I’m glad you think it all fit well.
February 9th, 2010 at 11:13 am
Awesome man. I feel it for real.
February 9th, 2010 at 11:32 am
when I first heard you I thought you was a southern rapper lol
February 9th, 2010 at 2:23 pm
pshhhhhhhhhhh lol aite whatever then